
I am 16, I live in Ontario, Canada. I have had several online business ventures, have extensive experience in customer satisfaction and solving problems. I have strong computer and communication skills. I don’t have much experience working under someone, just lawn cutting for a company that I can’t get a reference from. All of that is on my resume.
On the rare occasion that I get an interview, I always show up in business clothing such as dress pants, shined leather shoes, dress shirt and tie. It seems the harder I try, the less likely it is for me to get a job.
I would start a full time summer business but I am lacking capital. I don’t have anyone that can lend me money and can’t get a loan.
I just got turned down now for another job that I had an interview for on wednesday. I mind all of my friends around me getting jobs from doing next to nothing. I try so hard but no one will cut me some slack. I can’t even get a job at a damn grocery store for crying out loud.
I reflect it has to be something incorrect with my resume. Can you please critique it and make annotations?
Here is a copy of my resume:
Work Objective
To obtain a position that will enable me to use my strong communication skills, customer-oriented background and ability to work well with people.
Education
H.S. Qualification, Grade 11
******* **********, Ontario – I am in the process of completing my High School Qualification.
Work Experience
Self Employment, ******, Ontario 2007 – Present
Development and management of several successful online ventures, counting:
Authored four eBooks on the topics of Internet Marketing and Corporal Fitness and successfully developed a mailing list, clients and product sales
Worked alongside several companies as an affiliate marketer, selling and trading merchandise on sites such as eBay and Amazon
Managed advertising campaigns to market subscription based programs as well as onetime fee goods
Contacted customers to say them of special sales and new merchandise shipments and fostered client patronage through the use of be grateful-you notes and special occasion cards
Collaborated with many ad hoc web designers, graphic designers, and professional ghostwriters online to develop websites
2007 – 2008
Contract Landscaping, ****** and ******, Ontario
Performed innumerable lawn maintenance tasks for neighbours and a private business, counting lawn cutting, weeding and pruning of shrubs
Skills
•Communication Skills: Work well in a team setting, able to relate in a respectful and professional manner, exercise sound judgement and can problem decipher effectively
•Advanced Computer Skills: Data Entry, Editing and Proofreading, Internet Technology, Advertising / Promotions, MS Office, E-Mail, Adobe Photoshop, CSS & HTML Programming, Keyboarding Skills
•Personal Skills: Perseverance, Motivated, Honesty and Integrity, Ability to Learn Quickly, Compliance, Strong Morals
Leisure activities and Interests
Am an avid amateur golfer considering a business oriented career in some facet of the golf industry (golf course management and/or architecture)
Participate in a regular strength training and athletic conditioning program as a member of a local fitness club
Am a student of Karate (5 year member of the Black Belt Club) anticipating earning my black belt in November
Hypothesis and glide touchtone phone system controlled aircraft and am a past member of the ********** Model Aircraft Club where I attended club meetings and events
Have loved downhill skiing and off road mountain biking for many years
Delight in being outdoors, camping, hiking and golfing
References
Available upon request
Thankfulness, I don’t want to sound needy but I need a job terribly. I’ve even been to employment offices and requested to be contacted from a youth employment organization but not surprisingly, they didn’t contact me back.
What am i doing incorrect?
Thankfulness a bunch
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